so i wrote this idk what u can call it lol but it just kinda came to me last nite and once i started it i couldn't stop. so tell me what u think and maybe if u know anythiing i could add

Her long brown hair flows effortlessly down her back.
eyes full of such lust and passion, you wouldn't believe she's fifteen.
but, don't be fooled by this, she lives each day hiding her true feelings from reality.
fear gets us all at some point in life.
she's too afraid to find love again;
and love can't break the walls her broken heart has holding up, struggling more and more each day to stay up.
too afraid to trust any one soul more than she could trust her self with that bottle of forbidden temptation.
too strong to let the same person in twice.
too vulnerable to fight this war alone.
but she is who she is and this heartbreak makes her invincible.
but even this heart knows life gets worse before it gets better, right?
and she keeps her head held high through it all. life is sometimes so innocent it can make cry for what is good and laugh at what is bad.
don't let life pass you by in the blink of an eye,
trust your heart,
because this heart is invincible